Hi @elois-fuller – welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:

GREAT profile photo! Please zoom in more so we see more of your face and less of the background behind you.

You also need a background banner image. Please email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her your field of business and she will create something for you!

Here is our graphic designer’s contact below – please email her.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

Great headline – I tweaked it a bit! I removed the question at the end because it wasn’t alpha enough.

Want Top PROFIT Selling Your Home WITHOUT Added Stress? ☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Florida ☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

Remove your call to action from the middle of your profile, this is a sales letter so you really want to lead them through your message and then at the end you can add your call to action.

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized!

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Great testimonials but please make them 1-3 sentences long MAX. Too chunky of paragraphs – short and sweet.

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂 nice work!