4 years, 5 months ago-
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https://www.linkedin.com/in/rebeccabenson7/
Hello Negeen,
I hope all is well. Im assuming this is the correct place to get a review on my LINKEDIN?
Please see link above, Also wondering about getting the banner add changed, who do I send pictures and info to to have that done?
Thank you
Rebecca Benson
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Hey @rebecca-benson – YES, you posted in the correct place and I have your feedback below!
We have a full-time graphic designer, Lindsey, that can create a better banner image for you. Please email her and tell her about your field of business and she can create something better.
Headline (words under name):
Your headline needs some work and based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
About Section:
There’s too much space before your first sentence “What I do in 7 words or less”. Does that make sense??
Keep your testimonials from 1-3 sentences and no longer “Still not sure” paragraph was very long so shorten that up.
You also need to fix the way you’re indenting some of your paragraphs. Try to make the overall layout look like this:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
Everything else looks GREAT 🙂
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Hello Negeen,
I appreciate your help on this. Please see updated Profile.. Let me know what you think??
https://www.linkedin.com/in/rebeccabenson7/
Also I’ve emailed Lindsey with my information about creating a new background/banner photo.
Thank you
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Hey @rebecca-benson – AWESOME job revising!!
Is it required for you to have: BRE: 01349930 in the headline?? If not, I would just put it at the end with your call to action.
Revised:
“I Can Help YOU sell your home quickly with TOP notch customer service!”
Everything else looks great!!
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