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    • #43772

      Laverne Denyer
      Participant
        @Ldenyer@netzero.net

        Please check out what I have so far done with my Preliminary Profile

        LESSON 2 – Update Your LinkedIn Profile

        And I would like help with the Summary. Somehow my brain isn’t clicking on it.

        Thanks.

        Laverne

      • #43778

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hey @laverne-denyer – actually, you can just click this as complete in Lesson 2 because you already put the information on LinkedIn and I have been providing you feedback. Essentially, the lesson accelerator was to prepare you for putting everything in your LinkedIn profile, which you have done.

          Please look at the feedback I provided. In the lesson, you can check mark that you accomplished the profile accelerator.

        • #43782

          Laverne Denyer
          Participant
            @Ldenyer@netzero.net

            I did check it. @negeen-dargahi
            https://www.linkedin.com/in/laverne-e-denyer-52458417/

          • #43786

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @laverne-denyer – good work revising! Are you still waiting for Lindsey on the background image??

              Your headline needs to change – if you could think back on your Perfect Client and their pain points, I’d like you to fill out the template below and copy and paste it in your headline slot please:

              Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

              About:

              Remove this from the beginning of your About section:
              “How well do you know who you are and how to live your life’s goals peace and joy? That is the question for you to ask yourself. Can you answer that question fully and honestly? Is there more you want to know? When you are READY for intuitive guidance, PM me to see if we’re a good fit!”

              The sentence below was revised because the question was grammatically incorrect:

              Are you lonely and looking for a healthy relationship or simply need to fix a toxic relationship?

              Everything else looks GREAT!!!! It made me want to seek your advice immediately 😉 good work, Laverne!

               

            • #43789

              Laverne Denyer
              Participant
                @Ldenyer@netzero.net

                Yes I am still waiting for the background image. Thanks.

              • #43791

                Laverne Denyer
                Participant
                  @Ldenyer@netzero.net

                  I received and posted the background image. @negeen-dargahi

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                • #43795

                  n d
                  Keymaster
                    @negeen@coredm.com

                    Hi @laverne-denyer – the slogan at the bottom right is very difficult to read.

                    Can you either have Lindsey remove that or choose a non-cursive font??

                  • #43804

                    Laverne Denyer
                    Participant
                      @Ldenyer@netzero.net

                      I sent her an email with your comment.

                    • #43819

                      Laverne Denyer
                      Participant
                        @Ldenyer@netzero.net

                        This is the revised banner

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                      • #43825

                        n d
                        Keymaster
                          @negeen@coredm.com

                          Looks much better, @laverne-denyer!

                           

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