Hey @andrew-szabo – a really nice job taking action on your 4 questions! Below are my comments 🙂

Question 1 performs much better with something short and sweet. I do like both your options but I would prefer you to go with the bolded option. Now, if you want to split test between the two for two weeks, that is also an option!

Question 2 performs better by asking a “yes” or “no” question. I would also keep that in mind. I would also consider rephrasing that question to a yes or no question. It’s a good one!

Question 3: don’t say “thanks for your response!” Instead, react. “Got it!” or “Okay, great!” Also, use Q3 to not ask another personal and qualifying question. Instead, ask something like this:

3) Love that! If I had a few simple strategies that would help you accomplish that, would you like me to share those with you?

Q4 is WAY too long. I love the content but people won’t be reading that. So, you want to jump right to get them on your calendar. You can share all of that information on the call.

4) Fantastic. What are a few time windows that you have available tomorrow to chat?

5) 2pm works. What’s your mobile?

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I hope this helps – great work!!