5 replies, 3 voices Last updated by Maura Bain 4 years, 6 months ago
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    • #43487

      Maura Bain
      Participant
        @MauraBain757@gmail.com

        Hi @negeen-dargahi @halle-eavelyn @kent-littlejohn

         

        Here is the link for my 30 sec commercial for your review and feedback

         

        Thanks

      • #43495

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          YESSS @maura-bain-2!! This looks so professional and very engaging – I immediately felt at ease and wanted to call you up!

          Go ahead and share this on any platform you want. Excellent work!

        • #43504

          Halle Eavelyn
          Moderator
            @halle@coredm.com

            I like it!! I don’t love it yet.  I can feel you hesitating a little.  You’re SOOOOO warm and friendly – I feel like a little more speed, a little shorter on the pauses between sentences AND raise the camera so you’re not looking down on me.  I agree with Negeen that you can post this one.  AND I suggest you rework it as well.

            Great job taking Massive Imperfect Action, @maura-bain-2!

          • #43563

            Maura Bain
            Participant
              @MauraBain757@gmail.com

              Ok What do you think of the re-make @halle-eavelyn @negeen-dargahi @kent-littlejohn

               

              https://youtu.be/hkdrwqDt6Y0

            • #43567

              n d
              Keymaster
                @negeen@coredm.com

                Hey @maura-bain-2, great job taking feedback and revising – I like how the camera is at eye level this go around!

                I really liked it 🙂

              • #43569

                Maura Bain
                Participant
                  @MauraBain757@gmail.com

                  Thanks @negeen-dargahi for the feedback.

                  I appreciate it, and grateful for all the feedback I can get  :  )

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