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Do you feel vulnerable having only one source of income?
Would you like to be in greater control over your families financial future?
Do you need more income to enjoy your retirement or assist loved ones?
I can help YOU build a profitable e-commerce business in 90 days.
Essentially…
My team and I help you create an automated e-commerce business that you can operate from anywhere in the world.
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This automated income stream can scale to either replace your existing income or provide an additional revenue stream for your family.
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@jennifer-martin – do I tag you for all questions? Or who do you suggest I tag to get attention in the forums?
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Hi @ann-sieg, my apologies on the delay!! GREAT job on your pain point questions. Few things:
After you ask your last pain point question…
I want you to introduce yourself and what you do:
“Hi, I’m Ann Sieg and I’m a ______ helping clients like YOU build a profitable e-commerce business in JUST 90 days!”
Please add 2-3 more sentences on how you help your clients and what you do for them.
You need a call to action at the end***
If you’re finally ready to _________ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
(please tag me when you’ve revised — great work!) 🙂
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Thanks @negeen-dargahi – here is the re-write
Do you feel vulnerable having only one source of income?
Would you like to be in greater control over your families financial future?
Do you need more income to enjoy your retirement or assist loved ones?
I can help YOU build a profitable e-commerce business in 90 days.
Hi, I’m Ann Sieg and I lead of team of coaches at the E-Commerce Business School that helps clients like YOU build a profitable e-commerce business in JUST 90 days!
We will be mentoring you with live private and group coaching sessions through a complete and proven step-by-step process to create quick cash flow and profits, holding you accountable every step of the way.
Essentially…
My team and I help you create an automated e-commerce business that you can operate from anywhere in the world.
This automated income stream can scale to either replace your existing income or provide an additional revenue stream for your family.
If you’re finally ready to commit to a better future for you and your family, message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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Excellent job @ann-sieg – this is a much more powerful message!!!
You can move forward to filming your infomercial 🙂
Before filming, please watch Halle’s video “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.
Here is also a sample a client made for inspiration: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5JJn9s2V6bg
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