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      Brian Wilson
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        @brianwilson@johnlscott.com

        This is focused toward Higher end Buyers, according to my Avatar.

        @halle-eavelyn @negeen-dargahi

        Hi, my name is Brian Wilson.  I’m a Realtor and have been a real estate broker with John L. Scott Real Estate for over 15 years.

        My business is all about helping you find and purchase the waterfront, stunning view or exceptional property you’ve been dreaming about while you’ve been building your successful career or business.

        If you’ve decided that time is short, and you are ready for the home where you can gather with family or friends to have fun times at the beach and build memories for a lifetime, I can help you find exactly what you are looking for.

        I listen well and am very sensitive to your specific needs and wants. With discretion, I’ll do the legwork, saving you time and my knowledge and team of experts assure that you’ll make thoroughly vetted decisions.  (assure that you’ll avoid potential pitfalls, not sure of the best wording here…)

        With my expertise and hundreds of satisfied clients, you’ll be in good hands with me and not have to worry about making any big mistakes or missing something in the process. I’ll expertly guide you from negotiating an offer that will secure your dream (and through each step of the process) to connecting you with expert inspectors or any other professionals who might be needed.  You can forget your worries about the details because I’ll lay them all out for you and then handle all of them, allowing you to enjoy the anticipation of happiness and good times to be had, your dream. (so you’ll just be able to enjoy anticipating the day you can move-in)

        Having grown-up and lived in the greater Seattle area all my life I know all the communities and areas to help you focus your search, saving you time and getting you just what you want.

        If you are ready to make your Best Move, message me here on Linkedin or call/txt me at 360-689-2466.

        Thank you.

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        n d
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          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @brian-wilson! You did a really great job adding lots of helpful and informative content to your infomercial!

          What your infomercial needs most is an attention-grabbing intro and better organization of points. This can help condense it if needed and also get your message across powerfully.

          How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m Brian Wilson and I am a Realtor helping clients _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients) you can add your content to these sections but clean it up where you see fit.

          (you can add 1-3 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

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