4 years, 8 months ago-
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I tried to donwnload my video here, but the file was too large, so here is the text:
HECP 30 sec. video
Hi, do you or someone you know have a house that you don’t want or need, & would like to sell quickly and easily? Or do you want to buy a home, but your credit was dinged due to divorce, loss of job, or medical illness? My company Helping People Get Homes helps people with both. You can get out of the responsibility of a house you don’t want, or buy a house you don’t think you can afford. We also pay bonuses for referring friends. Avoid realtor fees, and having to “show” the house over and over. You get into your own home with only 5% down to Rent to Own, or 10% down to buy directly from me. I helped a young school teacher buy a home within walking distance of her school, who gave her $10,000 for buying a home in her school district, which she used as her down payment. Find out more on my websites: http://www.sellnmove.com to sell, http://www.house4anyone.com to buy or text me at 610-721-2644.Question: is there a way to make a link to my websites rather than having to mention them orally?
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Hi @robert-meilahn, good job taking action. For this infomercial, you need to focus on either buyers or sellers. Same thing with your LinkedIn page. Focusing on one makes your message more direct and will get better results that way.
Once you pick buyers or sellers that you’ll be speaking with, try to avoid suggesting something and adding “or” in between. It’s okay to do this once but not too much.
I’d like you to fill out this template and revise – once I approve, you can go ahead and refilm 🙂
How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…
Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?Want __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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