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Hi, please review and get back to me with edit suggestions0f7512d4-3f74-48f5-b138-1c919d672504-Infomercial
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Hi @wilma-mixon-halls, you look great!! Did I ever get a chance to provide feedback on your script prior to filming? I just want to check.
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No it was impromtu, and I did not use my summary for the script. I can however, refilm, thats why I am asking for feedback. the summary seemed redundant, but what do I know??? LOL
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Hi @wilma-mixon-halls – I’d like to approve your script before you film again, if possible. I’m finding that there are a few gaps in what could be a powerful infomercial. Here is a fun template below to work from to help you organize your points better:
How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…
Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?Want __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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