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Hello Negreen
Here is my first cut at the infomercial . Looking forward to your comments and upgrades.
Kristy
What if you could have a conversation and speak your truth with anyone be it with your friends, your partner, or the office without feeling fear or judgment of them or yourself?
How would you like to quiet that internal struggle “it has to be perfect” and “am I good enough” I can tell you that most of us have these conversations and pretend that we don’t. It’s human nature.
That’s exactly what I can do for you. You’ll get the tools and practices that allow you to be unapologetically you in any situation. You can become the leader you have been looking for: a powerful, authentic and compassionate you.
Message me here on LinkedIn to see if we can work together. Thank you for your time and I look forward to your message.
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Hi @kristy-deegan, nice job taking action on your infomercial!! Below are my comments:
Your first question was running on a bit long.
How about this instead:
Do you find yourself trying to be a perfectionist and finding yourself unable to accomplish tasks?
Want to QUIET that internal voice that says “it has to be perfect” and “I’m not good enough”?
Are you needing __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m [NAME] and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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Please take another look at my infomercial script see if I am clear about what needed to change and why. Thanks
INFOMERCIAL Script
Do you find yourself trying to do things perfectly only to judge and compare your results with others?
Want to QUIET that internal voice that says, “get it right” and “what will others think”?
Are you needing relief from the struggle and chaos in your mind?
Well, if you answered ‘YES’ to any of these questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m Kristy Deegan and I am a Life, Business and Spiritual coach helping clients get freedom from chaos, scarcity, and fear.
- Through inquiry and new distinctions, you get reconnected to your inner child so that you are free from fears and feel safe.
- Through daily practices, you will see how abundance is alive in your world and learn how to be in alignment to manifest it.
- Through inquiry and practices, you get connected to your higher power so that your wise woman can shine and live the purpose you are here for.
I dig in where most coaches stop. If you want to go deep and heal the reasons you do what you do, (or don’t do) I’m the coach for you
I’m looking for angels of light that will bring kindness and love to every interaction
If you want the freedom I’m talking about and want to shine your light, then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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