Hi @chris-bolger! First off, welcome to the program and nice work taking action on your profile!! 🙂

Below is my feedback on changes I’d like you to make:

Love your smiling profile photo but do you have a better photo that is of high quality? If you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, ask her to add a white background for you on the improved profile photo.

Your background image is OK but not great… I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better! She can even create a better banner image with your own images.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

Looks great!!

I would add world record breaker AFTER the “dedicated” part and before the MESSAGE ME part.

About section:

Right now, this is all I see:

14 years under fire experience
2 Broken World Records
2 Published Books
Obsession with Hypnosis, Holistic Mindset Work, and Teaching Others How to Perform better

#NoClientLeftBehind 

You are creating a sales letter and there needs to be MORE information. There needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.

If you can, I recommend copying Kent’s profile outline and adding YOUR own content to it:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

More examples below:

Look how they detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

Please go back through the lesson – you need a lot more content!!

You need to tell them:

what you do, how you help them, who you work with, why they should work with you

CALL TO ACTION – you need a better one:

If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

I love hearing that @chris-bolger!! Super proud of you!!

Keep going through the program – if you make it to the Thursday live call, share your win of accomplishing your Profile Accelerator, to the group!

Take care!

@chris-bolger, your “About” section had a HUGE transformation and looks fantastic!! Excellent work!!

ALSO – did you email Lindsey about your profile photo and background image?? Those really need to change. The more professional the better.

Here is her email: Lindsey@coredm.com

Try to have someone take a high-quality photo of you for your profile photo!