Dashboard Forums High End Client Program LinkedIn – General Questions 30 Second infomercial Script – Please review

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    • #36602

      James Blakemore
      Participant
        @james@jamesblakemore.com

        What if you have millions of dollars worth of manpower and equipment on a job ready to go and your key personnel are stuck in traffic driving from Midland or Odessa?

         

        What if that huge project is held up because someone had a car wreck driving from home?

         

        How much does lost time due to traffic delays cost you?

         

        What would you do if half your crew didn’t make it to work on time?

         

        What are the job safety ramifications of a crew that drives an hour and a half to two hours each way to pull a 12 hour shift?

         

        How would you like to KNOW that your key personnel were close enough to be completely rested and not have to worry about a long commute from town?

         

        Want to give your people a better experience than a man camp?

         

        We provide individual living quarters in the heart of the Delaware Basin with full services including living area, kitchen, satellite TV and internet in each unit.

         

        Call me, I can help!! 432-205-1362

         

        Let me show you the best answer for your key people!!

      • #36603

        James Blakemore
        Participant
          @james@jamesblakemore.com

          SECOND EDIT!!!

           

          What if you have millions of dollars worth of manpower and equipment on a job ready to go and your key personnel are stuck in traffic driving from Midland or Odessa?

           

          What if that huge project is held up because someone had a car wreck driving from home?

           

          How much does lost time due to traffic delays cost you?

           

          What would you do if half your crew didn’t make it to work on time?

           

          What are the job safety ramifications of a crew that drives an hour and a half to two hours each way to pull a 12 hour shift?

           

          How would you like to KNOW that your key personnel were close enough to be completely rested and not have to worry about a long commute from town?

           

          Want to give your people a better experience than a man camp?

           

          We provide individual living quarters in the heart of the Delaware Basin with full services including living area, kitchen, satellite TV and internet in each unit.

           

          If you are ready to provide the best housing for your key people, call me, I can help!! 432-205-1362

           

        • #36609

          n d
          Keymaster
            @negeen@coredm.com

            Hi @james-blakemore, thank you for submitting your infomercial for review!

            You have some great pain point questions but there are far too many. You’re asking 7 questions. I want you to only ask 3!

            Try filling this out to organize your points:

            How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

            (The first question you asked is a bit long – so make them short and sweet)

            (after you ask 3 questions)

            If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

            Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

            (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

            (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

            If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

          • #36622

            James Blakemore
            Participant
              @james@jamesblakemore.com

              Here you go @negeen-dargahi!

               

              What if you have millions of $$$ of manpower and equipment ready to go and your key people are stuck in traffic driving from town?

               

              What if that huge project is held up because someone had a car wreck driving in from the city?

               

              What are the safety ramifications of a crew that drives an hour and a half to two hours each way to pull a 12 hour shift?

               

              If you EVER worry about these things, you are in the right place!

               

              Hi! I’m James Blakemore, and we specialize in providing a better living environment for your key people in the Delaware Basin

               

              We provide individual living quarters in the heart of the basin with full services including living area, kitchen, satellite TV and internet in each unit, every person’s little home away from home.

               

              Your people are closer to location, so they are fresher, more focused and generally safer on the job than someone who just spent two hours fighting traffic.

               

              Our accommodations are safe, secure, private and comfortable.

               

              We are not your standard man camp, we are better and we charge less than they do.

               

              If you are ready to provide the best housing for your key people, call me, I can help!! 432-205-1362 or just Message me here on LinkedIn.

               

               

            • #36639

              n d
              Keymaster
                @negeen@coredm.com

                Love it, @james-blakemore!! Great work! It is ready to be recorded!

                If you have questions on the recording, please first watch Halle’s “VIDEO TIPS” video in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

              • #36643

                James Blakemore
                Participant
                  @james@jamesblakemore.com

                  Just FYI, I’ve been plagued with a fairly serious urinary tract issue, and have been only able to work in fits and starts for the last two weeks. I am having issues working up a recording. (Unless you want it done from my bed 😉 😉 LOL)

                  • #36650

                    n d
                    Keymaster
                      @negeen@coredm.com

                      Hi @james-blakemore – sorry to hear that! Film the video whenever you are feeling better!

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