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      KARL BAREITHER
      Participant
        @hecp@BRSYSTEM.COM
        Are you wanting to sell more product? Increase advisors revenue? Stand out in the High Net Worth family owned business market? How would you like your trainers, field managers and selected advisors to have a system to follow that guides them through the process?

        Imagine revenue currently unrealized being earned by charging a fee for planning services. Product sales more than double based on increased credibility like those of accountants and attorneys. The entire family becomes the client that sets your advisors apart from all others. Your trusted advisors become part of the planning  and implementation process. Communication improves. Continuity is ensured. The business survives to the next generation and beyond.

         

        That is exactly what we can do for you. The Family Business Renewal (FBR) System is a proven model now available for trainers, field managers and advisors. Message me here on Linkedin to see how we can help your company grow by working together. Thank you for your time, I look forward to receiving your message.

         

         

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        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @karl-bareither, this is a really great start on your infomercial. A few tweaks I’d like you to make as far as the organization of points goes.

          I want you to choose 3 of the most powerful pain point questions. Having 4 is dragging it out a bit so let’s stick to 3. Your current questions are okay but could begin in a more powerful and empathetic way.

          Are you WANTING to sell more products but don’t know where to begin?? (example)

          Do you NEED _______ but _______??

          Are you finally ready to stand out in the High Net Worth family-owned business market?

          (then you would segway to introducing yourself and what you do)

          Hi, I’m @karl-bareither and I am a _______ helping clients like YOU __________.

          (Karl, what you have written as the last 2 big paragraphs are kind of difficult to read. It’s a bit complex and too much fact giving – remember that this is you speaking to them like a friend)

          2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          How would you like your trainers, field managers and selected advisors to have a system to follow that guides them through the process? Sounds great right? When you work with me, I make sure you’re in the loop 100% of the way. I teach you my unique process to achieve ___________. With a full team attentive to your needs, you can expect _______. (EXAMPLE) but see how that was more personable and flowed well enough to get the information out?

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          GREAT call to action!!!

           

        • #36057

          KARL BAREITHER
          Participant
            @hecp@BRSYSTEM.COM

            Please review our infomercial revision…

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            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Looks great, @karl-bareither!! You are cleared to film 🙂

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