Hi @laraine-porter! NICE work taking massive imperfeCT action on your profile! Below is my feedback:

LOVE your background image – very professional!

Your profile photo is good but I’d update it down the road so it’s higher quality. It’s a bit grainy.

Headline:

What you currently have is okay – it’s rather loud with all of the capitalized words making it difficult to read. Try this outline instead:

Want To SELL Your Home To QUALIFIED Buyers WITHOUT Stress And Overwhelm?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Ohio☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

You’ve got some GREAT content in your summary – all it needs is some better organization of your points and paragraphs to break down those chunky paragraphs.

Also, for your bullet points, keep it to a max of 3-4… because more than that is too much and people will stop reading.

I’d actually like you to copy Kent’s format and add your own information to it. This is the format we teach in the program and it’d greatly benefit you!

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Make sure your call to action is said once and at the end. You have 2 paragraphs at the end asking them to take action. Just have it at the bottom for them to message you – like this:

If you’re ready to ________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision 🙂