Hi @cindy-perttu! Nice job on revising your profile! Below is my feedback:

Love the background image – very professional!

If you have another option for a profile photo, I’d like you to find one. The way your hair is edited and cut around isn’t the best.

GREAT headline!

Summary:

You have great content but there needs to be more information and better formatting.

Can you copy Kent’s format (which we teach in the program) and add in your own information to it?? This will really help with organizing and adding more points to your sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

GREAT call to action!

Hi @cindy-perttu! GREAT improvements 🙂

You don’t want to do step by step through your entire process but doing a brief overview. Remember that this is a sales letter that you’re leading them through.

Like this:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/

But you did such a great job improving. You can fix this later down the line if you’d like. I’m happy to take a look at your revision. Go ahead and keep moving forward in the program!

Thank you for working so hard!!