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@halle-eavelyn @jennifer-martin
After a lot of help from Jennifer, I think I am pleased with my Hero Story. I have renamed it, included a call to action and would like to go on from here!
Please review and let me know your comments. I have been working on this far too long, as you know.
Thank you,
Jennifer
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Jennifer I’m going to have @halle-eavelyn and @negeen-dargahi weigh in here they are more familiar with what works.
My two cents is that you have written a story rather than shared your story. If you want me to feel connected to you I need to know more about your feelings rather than facts.
Perhaps you can try recording an audio of you sharing the story as if you were talking to a friend, then transcribe it. I want you to go deeper. Not really loving the title.
Again see what others have to share. They are the experts here. 💚💚💚
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Jennifer, thank you for your response. It is hard to put into words how all of that felt. I’ll go back and re-read some others. I’m sure you are right on target, but I also want to hear from Halle and Negeen.
Maybe I will eventually get this right. Thanks again,
Jennifer
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@jen-davis – you threw the baby out with the bathwater. I am fine with you talking about Bill W, but it isn’t anything other than a dog whistle to recovering alcoholics. What Jennifer means in her notes, I think, is that you’ve told us the narrative here, without connecting your FEELINGS to it. Just go back to the first version, the one I gave you notes on, and make those few changes! You ARE nearly there!!! Keep GOING!!!
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Thank you.
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@jen-davis I’m missing you on the mindset calls. Please don’t get discouraged and let it take you out of the program!! Come on back – you know the drill – we go to the meetings to keep away the crazy the rest of the time. We love you!!
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Thanks, Halle – it has been a very bad week but a busy one~ I will be back on any calls possible next week, but I have watched the recordings. I am counting on this to get my business moving. I have not had a closing in too long and it is discouraging, to say the least. But I will put on my big girl pants and do it!
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I have a 11:15 appt tomorrow with a past client, so I’ll have to watch the recording of the call. I hate to miss it – those calls help me a ton.
Jen
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