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    • #31369

      Ed Benson
      Participant
        @ed.benson@exprealty.com

        Are you WORRIED about the selling of your home being a stressful and time-consuming problem?  With all those Negotiations and Regulations, you might encounter?

        Let me take all those worries off your shoulders, because when you put your trust in me, I will consult, negotiate, and handle all the details so that you will have your transaction completed successfully and in a timely manner.

        Let me help YOU today, so you can enjoy a Stress-Free transaction that meets and exceeds your goal.  Call me TODAY at 480-580-2990 or email me at ed.benson@exprealty.com, or message me here on LinkedIn.

      • #31396

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @ed-benson! Nice start on your infomercial. Few changes I’d like you to make:

          Your pain point questions are okay. Try filling this out and make them powerful. Something your clients would immediately relate to:

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          For example:

          Are you TIRED of your home sitting on the market taking more and MORE of your money?

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m  @ed-benson and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

          (you can use what you have but I also wanted to provide a better structure for you – good call to action)

          (Other than having a smooth transaction, think of how else you help your clients)

          Tag me in your revision!

        • #31583

          Ed Benson
          Participant
            @ed.benson@exprealty.com

            Are you WORRIED of your home sitting on the market taking more and MORE of your money?

            Do you NEED a plan to make this a Stress-Free transaction that moves quickly?

            Want to get the highest price for your Home Quickly?

            If you answered YES to those questions, you came to the right place!

            Hi I’m Ed Benson and I am a professional Real Estate Consultant helping clients by listening to all your questions and issues then moving forward quickly to take care of everything you have concerns over so they are resolved.

            If you want to be stress-free then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

          • #31600

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              This looks FANTASTIC, @ed-benson!! Great job implementing my feedback 🙂

              If you have questions on your next steps, filming, check out Halle’s video “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy module.

              Here is an example of a video made by one of our clients:

              https://www.linkedin.com/in/nancy-anderson-4460742b/

               

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