Hi  @michael-culwell! Nice job taking action!! Yes, it worked. Below is my feedback:

I’d like you to go back through the Profile Accelerator, it looks like there’s a good amount of changes I’d like you to make that follow that structure.

Profile Photo: You look great!

Background Photo (blue rectangle behind your profile photo): This needs to be changed to an image that relates to your business. Please email Lindsey, tell her about your field of business, and she will actually create a custom background image for you to use.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

This is the best piece of ‘real estate’ on your LinkedIn profile. Let’s really make it POP. How about something like this…

Want ________ WITHOUT ______?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

It would look like this:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

Summary:

While you have some bits of good info, there needs to be better organization of what you provide to your clients.

I’d actually like you to COPY Kent’s summary and add your OWN information to it. This will allow for better organization, a better format, and a structure that works.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

You want to provide information that is:

Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you.

Call To Action:

You need a better one!

If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision 🙂