5 years, 8 months ago-
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@richard-farb I know you heard my PSA on the call, so just write back and tell me if you are sure this draft is ready for my review!!
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Yes. I’m ready
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@richard-farb my sincere apologies for my delay in giving my comments! I hope you have followed our suggestions and moved FORWARD in your program to other lessons.
On to specifics: I LOVE your story!!! I love the themes and how you spell them out. May I suggest that you change your title to match:
From: How I Transform Lives Through Real Estate And Strengthen Relationships Through The Process Of Home Ownership.
To: How Restarts and Rejection Make For Great Real Estate Experiences
And you want a CALL TO ACTION!!!! Look at other Hero Stories in this forum for an example, ok?
Let me know if you have any more questions!
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