Hi @larry-imm! A really nice job on your profile accelerator! Below is my feedback:

Background Photo (the image of the house behind your profile photo):
I don’t love this. Please EMAIL our graphic designer, Lindsey, and please ask her to create a new background photo for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under your name):
What you currently have written “I deliver “Performance not Promises” real estate services to clients in South-central Alaska” belongs as the first sentence of your summary not your headline.

Here’s what you can have as your headline –>

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

Summary:

LOOKS GREAT 🙂

I don’t find a place to put this question.  On the client journey, the first block that talks about email traffic, I don’t know what that means?

INFOMERCIAL…INFORMERCIAL

Are you wanting to  live the American Dream?

Do you need to own your own home?

Want to get rid of the stress and fear that you are feeling?

If you answered “yes” to these three questions you have come to the right place!

I am Shirley Morris…. the people realtor–   My goal is to make this process fun for you. 

You will be informed of the entire transaction process

You will give me all the details about your first home . The American Dream!

Your stress will be gone because I will search for homes for you

You will select those you want to see

Showing arrangements will be made for you

You meet me at the homes of your choice

You make an offer I do all the paperwork

Transaction closes – you get the Keys

You move in to your new home!  The Dream has come true.  Congratulations

Call me any time: #7037129545

Yes I did and I submitted another version tonight…about 3 hours ago.   Thanks