Hi @mandel-robinson-jr, nice job taking action on your profile! Below is my feedback:

Profile photo:

You are WAY too far from the camera. I can’t see your face clearly. Please get a better photo where we can see your smiling face UP CLOSE!

Background Photo:
What you have is okay but not great. I want you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something for you to use!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

Very nice headline. I made it more appealing. Please use the revised headline below:

Want BETTER Health Coverage Without Losing Money?☆EXPERT Helping Clients Get The Best Coverage☆☞ MSG Me!

Summary:

I challenge you to take out some of the “i” and replace them with “you”.

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important.

How about you ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your clients struggle with.

What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?” THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.

I’d even recommend you copy Kent’s profile outline and just add your own information to it:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Call To Action:

What you have is okay, but not great. Try this outline:

If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂