Hi @cindy-perttu! Nice job taking action on your profile – below is my feedback!

Profile Photo:
Can you zoom in a pinch more? This will help there be less of the white background.

Background Photo:
I don’t love what you have. Can you please email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her a bit about your field of business? She will create something BETTER for you!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

Looks GREAT!

Summary:

Your summary was off to a good start until you listed off TEN quotes. Remember, this is a sales letter and you want to provide information such as:

• who you work with
• how you help your clients
• what you do
• why they should work with you

Also, there need to be breaks in your summary paragraphs – because right now it looks like a huge paragraph.

Lastly, when you DO add in your testimonials, I like how short you made them but only add in up to 3!

I’d like you to copy Kent’s profile and add your own information to it. I’m suggesting this because his outline is great and you just need to organize your points and add better information.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Call To Action:

You need one!

If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂