Hi @kenesha-guerrier! Nice job taking action on your profile – below is my feedback:

Your background photo + profile photo both look great!

Headline (words under your name):

This is the best piece of ‘real estate’ on your profile. How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

Right now, there is one HUGE paragraph. You want to avoid this and instead create a sales letter.

There needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.

Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.

They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

There’s far too much emphasis in here on YOU and not enough on THEM – these videos will help you see why it’s important to make it so much more about them!

You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!

Call To Action:

You need one! Try filling the template out below:

If you’re ready for _______ then message me here TODAY on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision 🙂