Infomercial Script for Review

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    • November 5, 2018 at 3:56 pm #27266

      Frank Petras
      Participant
        @fpetras@frankpetras.com

        Here is the script I prepared for my 30 second infomercial.  Will you please review and edit as you deem appropriate.  Thank you!

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        Hi there!

         

        I hope you are having a super day!!

         

        I’m here to introduce myself and quickly tell you how I can help you nutshell.

         

        I am Frank Petras and I sell high-end luxury homes in Naples, Florida.

         

        I will sell your home for you at top dollar and quickly, and, working with me you will experience no stress surrounding the sale of your home.

         

        I have a very unique approach to getting your home sold and provide you concierge service, which means no stress for you!

         

        Please call me at (239) 595-2221 to see if we are fit for working together.

         

        I look forward to hearing from you and thank you for watching and allowing me to introduce myself and services.

         

        Have a great day!

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      • November 6, 2018 at 11:09 am #27342

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @frank-petras! This is a really good start but let’s really take advantage of this short video.

          Try filling this template out (which will help organize some points for you):

          How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

           

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