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@anthony-simonie @kent-littlejohn @halle-eavelyn @negeen-dargahi
hello! I need some help crafting a message to send to LinkedIn connections when I’m going to be in their City. Below are a few things I have come up with. I could really use your help here. Thanks!
- Hi Patrick, I hope you are well! I am going to be in Greenville this week until Thursday. I would like to meet you in person since I’ll be in the area. I’ve got a few minutes Tuesday and Wednesday afternoons. What is your availability then? Laura
- I hope you are having a great week! We’ve been connected since May and haven’t managed to interact yet. I am determined to change that. Let’s hop on a quick call to see if we have any potential for working together.
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<p style=”margin: 0in; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 11.0pt;”>Great to connect here on LinkedIn! I hope you are well! I am going to be in Greenville this week until Thursday. I think we may be able to do business together. I’ve got a few minutes Tuesday and Wednesday afternoons. What is your availability then? Laura</p>
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Hi @laura-barker, I know @halle-eavelyn will probably be better help 😉 below is my feedback:
I like the last one – specifically because you mention that you could do business together. This, in my opinion, will really grab someone’s attention rather than just stating you’re in town and want to chat (like in the first example).
Hope this helps!
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