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      Shirley Morris
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        @bajan45@msn.com

        Pssst….I hear that you are dying to live the American
        Dream…That you want to buy a house

        Great news! What’s stopping you from
        moving forward with this Dream
        My friends have told me such horror stories!
        Oh ! share some of those stories please if you can..
        First…… it took a long time and they had to work. Then they were afraid of making the wrong decision
        Why were they afraid…Because they knew very little about the process
        So right now you say that: There was fear, and we know that where there is no knowledge there is fear especially in making decisions , that fear creates STRESS
        Stress and lots of it, and my friends also tell me about the paperwork that is required and they had no idea about how to access that required paperwork.
        And then they talked about the fact that buying a home is a big investment , and making a mistake was out of the question…and then after all of the talk about definitely going it alone, they hired a realtor…….. Great decision……that decision did not cause any STRESS I am sure
        So you say that you need to hire a REALTOR
        Fantastic! You just hired a REALTOR! and I am free
        And I REMOVE YOUR FEAR because I am an experienced professional realtor, in the business for over 12 years, and love diversity in my diversity
        I remove the STRESS I EDUCATE you about the process, I help u make the right DECISION
        I have all THE REQUIRED PAPERWORK,
        I send you all the listings that fit into your specifications… you make the selection…I use my TIME so you are not behind
        When selecting the homes ……. I will help you make the right DECISION

        Then I complete all the PAPERWORK…… you just read and sign
        I COMMUNICATE with the owner and the bank saving you using your TIME
        Work with the bank and closing attorney to make sure all schedules are on TIME
        That sounds like a good deal to me…
        Great DECISION! So lets meet tomorrow in my office at 5.00 p.m.
        Perfect my investment will be a big one but I feel confident having you as my REALTOR
        Is the RIGHT DECISION

      • #26381

        Anonymous
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          @shirley-morris Great job taking action with your infomercial script! I love your energy and personality, however, this script could make a confusing and unprofessional infomercial.

          You have some great info though on how you help your clients! Let’s organize it in this template instead.

          How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

           

          TAG ME IN YOUR REVISION!

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