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@negeen-dargahi @halle-eavelyn
I’m not sure who to send this to but here is my updated Linkedin Profile. I really want to focus on sellers and investors. —
Are you thinking of selling your home? Investors, do you not have TIME to pay attention to EVERY detail in the transaction, but want to be in the loop? Do you want to get the MOST profit for your home in the SHORTEST TIME?
If this sounds like you, I can help.
I am a seasoned realtor, I worked in the mortgage side for 14+ years, I understand what it takes to sell and purchase a home. I also understand the emotional side of it as well.
I have a team of people behind me to make sure the process runs smoothly and to help you throughout the entire transaction. We take care of all of the details, keep in contact with you letting you know what the next step is and most importantly let you know when to show up for the closing.
Each home has a unique lifestyle and sometimes challenges. It’s my passion to help market and sell your home so that you can simply move on to your next adventure.
I consider it my job to take care of the questions that keep you up at night
I will help with staging, if needed
Help you control the showings to fit your lifestyle
Use Leading edge technology to market your home
I am very proactive in marking your home.Investors, I have purchased and sold investment properties. I know the pitfalls and the rewards of this business. I can help you find the best investment for you depending on what return on investment you are looking for. I can help partner with you in finding the best option you will need to create the wealth you are looking for.
I am very good at negotiating as long as I know where your bottom line is and how badly you want the home.
When you work with me, my team and I will help you sell faster, and find the next perfect home or investment property with a minimum amount stress.
Call me when you are ready to sell or purchase the best investment you will own.
call me at 616-541-4887 / melissahomewood773@gmail.com
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Hi @melissa-homewood, can you actually put the content above in your actual profile so I can provide my full 100% feedback? This is so I can see your profile photo, headline, background image AND summary, all in one.
In the meantime…
GREAT start on your profile!!
Here are some improvements to make.
We suggest focusing on only one target market. Not two. This is so your target market knows that you’re talking directly to them and makes your profile very specific and targeted.
Revise accordingly.
There are a lot of “i” in your summary right now and we recommend switching that with “you”. This helps keeps the focus on THEM.
Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.
Call To Action:
Let’s be more direct than “call me when you’re ready”. How about:
If you’re READY for _________ message me here on LinkedIn TODAY to see if we’re a good fit!
Tag me in your revision 🙂
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Hi Negeen,
Thank you for the feedback I appreciate it!! OK round 2 (-:
If at all possible I would like to leave in the investors part. A lot of sellers want to also invest and don’t think a regular realtor can help with that. But I will defer to your expertise…
I am having difficulty with this paragraph in my LinkedIn Profile. I understand we are not suppose to use the “I” statements, I watched the videos you suggested, but then how do you get the “I’m an expert trust me” factor into this? of we just don’t?? . Anyway here is the paragraph-
I am a seasoned realtor and worked in the mortgage industry for 14+ years. This benefits you since I understand both sides of the transaction and what it takes to sell and purchase a home.
And here is the link to my linkedIn; https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissahomewood/
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Thanks @negeen-dargahi I appreciate the input! I did change my LinkedIn and emailed Lindsey (-:
-Melissa
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Hi @melissa-homewood! Thank you for sending me a link to your profile – I’ve addressed your questions below:
Background Photo:
You need a better photo. Please email our graphic designer, Lindsey. Tell her about your field of business and she will create something much better for you to use!
Profile Photo:
GREAT photo! Zoom in a bit more so we can clearly see your face!
I totally understand with the points you’re making. Below I’ve reformatted your profile and this should really help. Just copy and paste what I have below:
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Are you thinking of SELLING your home?
Do you want to get the MOST profit for your home in the SHORTEST TIME?
Are you an investor and find you do not have TIME to pay attention to EVERY detail in the transaction but want to be in the loop?
WHAT I DO IN A FEW WORDS:
I deliver TO YOU an in-depth real estate service!
Essentially…
I allow YOU to focus on you instead of searching and negotiating.
What’s better?
I can deliver qualified buyers when you are ready to sell and I eliminate the stress of where your next property is coming from.
To help you save time and keep the transaction effortless for you… I have a team of people behind me to make sure the process runs smoothly.
We take care of all of the details, keep in constant contact with you, letting you know what the next step is, and most importantly ask you what the best day to close on your home would be.
The way I operate is a little different than most realtors. I understand information is power. You will receive statistics and buy/sell strategies. I use leading-edge technology to market your home so I can deliver results for you.
This market plan is a “less stress” approach to selling/buying properties so you can have more time for you.
WHO I ALSO WORK WITH: Investors – I have purchased and sold investment properties, so I understand the pitfalls and the rewards of this business.
We can partner together in helping you find the best options you will need to create the wealth you are looking for, with the least amount of time and effort from you.
Sounds great, right?
If you are READY to work with an agent to help you through the entire process while keeping the stress and process as seamless as possible… Message me here on LinkedIn TODAY to see if we’re a good fit!
CALL/TEXT ME AT 616-541-4887 / melissahomewood773@gmail.com
Let’s get you moving!
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Looks GREAT @melissa-homewood 🙂
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