7 replies, 3 voices Last updated by Anonymous 5 years, 11 months ago
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    • #25740

      Mario Kruja
      Participant
        @ekruja@icloud.com

        Please review my infomercial

      • #25761

        Anonymous
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          @mario-kruja Can you post your infomercial script here and then tag me by typing @ and then my name? That way I can review it

        • #25784

          Mario Kruja
          Participant
            @ekruja@icloud.com

            I already have it posted to my LinkedIn profile.   @amanda-hendrickson

          • #25850

            Anonymous
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              @mario-kruja OH! Gotcha, just watched it!

              GREAT job uploading it to youtube and then putting the link on your LI profile!

              Your script is great and your speaking pace is really good!

              The video is a bit too dark and it looks like you’re reading rather than it looking like you’re directly talking to your potential client. You want it to sound natural and conversational (not like a script).

              An umbrella light can really help your video look more professional, but it’s not necessary to buy one if you don’t already have one. Window light is also GREAT! Another thing to be aware of is your background and how it affects how professional your video looks.

              Check out fellow HECP client Neil McGlone’s infomercial for inspiration:

               

            • #25863

              Mario Kruja
              Participant
                @ekruja@icloud.com

                Sounds good .I’ll redo it . I don’t think that In can incorporate additional videos or material to it. Not much knowledgeable about it.

              • #26007

                Mario Kruja
                Participant
                  @ekruja@icloud.com

                  Please review it again. Thanks 

                • #26093

                  n d
                  Keymaster
                    @negeen@coredm.com

                    Tagging you in this @amanda-hendrickson

                     

                  • #26109

                    Anonymous
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                      @mario-kruja This definitely looks better than the first and brighter!

                      However, the lighting is still not great.

                      Watch Halle’s “video tips” video in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

                      Your video is not very engaging but that can be changed by simply having a nicer background and more enthusiasm in your voice!

                      Watch Halle’s video for more tips and then re-film and post the link here.

                      Please tag me so I see it right away!

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