Hi @debra-shultz – if you’d like feedback on your profile, you need to provide your LinkedIn URL so I can view your profile. If you don’t know how to do that, here’s how:

• go to app.hecp.com
• click on ‘tutorials’ on the left side
• watch the first video

If you need help with your background photo, please EMAIL Lindsey.

Here is her email –> Lindsey@coredm.com

Thank you!

Hi @debra-shultz, nice job taking action! Below is my feedback:

Did you email Lindsey about your background photo? (the blue rectangle behind your profile photo). If not, please do that.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under your name):

I don’t like what you have. Use what I’ve written below instead (just fill in the location part).

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

Summary:

Please look at the examples below of what your profile should look like and go back through the Profile Accelerator.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

PLEASE COPY THEIR OUTLINE AND FILL IN YOUR OWN INFORMATION TO IT ****

This will make it much easier for you.

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important.

How about you ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your clients struggle with.

What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?” THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.

Also, your paragraphs are a bit chunky and need better organization. (check out the examples I provided and look at the format which you can copy)

You want to provide information that is:

Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you. It’s nice to educate them but not throughout the entire profile.

Call To Action:

You need one!

“If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision!!

Hi @debra-shultz! Just a reminder:

I am the one that provides you feedback through this website and Lindsey is the graphic designer who you are only able to communicate with through email 🙂

Hi @debra-shultz, that is correct. You will get feedback from either myself or @amanda-hendrickson

If you need help with graphics such as a LinkedIn background or white background for your profile photo, Lindsey is in charge of that BUT you must EMAIL her.

Lindsey@coredm.com