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October 12, 2018 at 3:17 pm #25157
Hi, I did the work, the profile is edited and looking forward to any feedback. Thanks
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October 15, 2018 at 2:56 pm #25299
Hi @jerry-koller-2! GREAT start on your profile! Below is my feedback:
Nice profile photo!!
You also need a better background photo. I want you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something for you to use!
Headline:
This is the best piece of ‘real estate’ on your LinkedIn profile. Let’s really make it POP. How about something like this…
Want Maximum _________WITHOUT _______?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
Summary:
You did an awesome job in your summary!
The content and format need better organization.
Break up some of your paragraphs like Kent does below.
Can you copy Kent’s outline and add in your own information?? This will really help it stand out.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Call To Action:
You need one!
“If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂
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October 29, 2018 at 6:09 pm #26651
Thank you
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December 26, 2018 at 4:33 pm #30000
Hi Negeen,
I want to rework this. I started setting this up to look for new business and now have decided to start over with the main goal to recruit new agents to my brokerage.
Is there a way to talk with someone there that can give me a little guidance?
Thanks
Jerry
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December 26, 2018 at 11:25 pm #30014
Hi @jerry-koller-2, you are more than welcome to submit a revised LinkedIn profile (based on your new avatar) for some new feedback.
OR, you can come to the Live Q&A call with the team and see if your question can be answered there.
All in all, if your message or the direction of your business has changed, you can easily fix that in your profile.
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