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@negeen-dargahi @jennifer-martin
“Do you want to participate in transactions where you get ownership rights, which means access to ALL the potential benefits?
AND
Do you want to have those transactions be in emerging markets where you don’t have to deal with tenants, trash or toilets?”
Does this sound too good to be true?
It might sound like that, but after years of experience, I will tell you that
people can have their cake and eat it, too — when it comes to Real Estate, at
least.
We provide our partners with deals that have good cash flow, a solid back-end, institutional grade management and no day-to-day dealings with the property.
We will save you PRECIOUS Time and effort so you just enjoy the returns that are produced by participating in deals that we could not as individuals normally participate in.
Stop worrying about the nightmares of property ownership and the intricacies of finding them, negotiating the deal and purchasing them.
We do all the heavy lifting for you
Our expertise and connections to all the required experts will put your investing on auto pilot.
— without you having to lift a finger.
If you want access to profitable deals without having to tie up all your time, please call me today to discuss working together – 866-606-6841. Thanks.”
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Hi @marc-dupuis, you did SUCH a great job with your infomercial. Few tiny tweaks I’d like for you to make:
I want to switch the order of your pain point questions so from the get go, people know what you’re talking about. Your first question was a bit vague.
Changed To:
Do you want to have all transactions be in emerging markets where you don’t have to deal with tenants, trash or toilets?”
AND
“Do you want to participate in transactions where you get ownership rights, which means access to ALL the potential benefits?
[CONSIDER REWORDING THE 2nd question — it’s a bit complex and can be better simplified]
Does this sound too good to be true?
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After you say:
“It might sound like that, but after years of experience, I will tell you that
people can have their cake and eat it, too — when it comes to Real Estate, at
least.”
^ I would give a fun little smile after that line AND DONT FORGET TO INTRODUCE YOURSELF 🙂
“Hi, I’m @marc-dupuis and I am a _______ helping clients like YOU ________.”
Everything else looks fantastic, great work, Marc!!
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thanks for the feedback, not sure I understand why we’d want to put a smiley face this is a video right??
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here is the updated verbiage, what do you think?
Do you want to be part of real estate deals in emerging markets where you don’t have to deal with tenants, trash or toilets?”
AND
“What if you got ownership rights, which means access to ALL the potential benefits?
Does this sound too good to be true?
It might sound like that, but after years of experience, I will tell you that
people can have their cake and eat it, too — when it comes to Real Estate, at
least. <<< I PUt a smiley face here even if I don’t understand why>>
Hi I’m Marc Dupuis and I’m a put together deals where I bring in private investors like you to participate in all the benefits real estate has to offer.
We provide our partners with deals that have good cash flow, a solid back-end, institutional grade management and no day-to-day dealings with the underlying property.
We will save you PRECIOUS time and effort so you can enjoy the returns that are produced by participating in EXCLUSIVE deals.
Stop worrying about the nightmares of property ownership and the intricacies of finding them, negotiating the deal and purchasing them.
We do all the heavy lifting for you.
Our expertise and connections to all the required experts will put your investing on auto pilot.
— without you having to lift a finger.
If you want access to profitable deals without having to tie up all your time, please call me today to discuss working together – 866-606-6841. Thanks.”
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SUPER job, @marc-dupuis!!
Typo:
Hi I’m Marc Dupuis and I’m a put together deals where I bring in private investors like you to participate in all the benefits real estate has to offer.
^ fix that and you are DONE!
If you have questions on filming:
watch Halle’s video called: “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.
I’m proud of your hard work!
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thanks Negeen
ya I saw that video a while back, not sure there is much we can do with our videos at this point! we still live in our RV so won’t have a decent location till we move into our new house at the end of the month. so maybe we’ll use these ones for now and then we’ll redo them once we have a good backdrop.
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Sounds great, @marc-dupuis!
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