Hi @julian-whitaker! I can already tell you’re a rockstar – SUPER job on your profile! Below is my feedback:

Your profile photo AND background photo looks awesome. Very professional and attention-grabbing!

Headline:

This is a very important spot on your profile. I’d like you to instead grab them immediately with what you can help your clients with. Try filling this template out and using it:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

I love that you provided some great information in your profile, but I’m not a fan of the bullet points to convey who you are and what you do.

This is a sales letter so you want to lead them through your message.

I’d actually recommend you copy Kent’s profile summary and just add in your own information to it. This will really help you – especially when organizing your points rather than giving a list of what you do.

—>  https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Also, any contact information or call to action should be at the very bottom of your profile. So, make sure to move ► LET’S CHAT

Call To Action:

I recommend having this at the bottom:

If you want __________, then message or call me TODAY to ______.

Tag me in your revision 🙂