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      Cecilia Najdowski
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        @ceci2015sa@gmail.com

        Cecilia Najdowski URL

        Linkedin.com/in/callcecilia

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        n d
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          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @cecilia-najodowski! SUPER job on your profile! Few things:

          Did our graphic designer create your background? If not… please email her and ask her to create a custom background photo for you. The one you currently have is good but not great.

          Lindsey@coredm.com

          Lastly…

          I want you to have “WHAT I DO IN A FEW WORDS”at the beginning of your summary.

          I redid your introduction:

          WHAT I DO IN A FEW WORDS:

          I help people INVEST in real estate AND save tens of $1000s in interest and taxes!

          Essentially…

          I remove the stress of saving for college, losing a home due to disability – death – divorce AND the fear of outliving your income retirement.

          Sounds great, right?

          Grammar error:

          “using NONE OF HIS OWN MONEY!!!”

          TO:

          “without using ANY of HIS own money!!”

          Everything else looks great 🙂

           

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