1 reply, 2 voices Last updated by Anonymous 5 years, 11 months ago
Viewing 1 reply thread
  • Author
    Posts
    • #24455

      Kent Homer
      Participant
        @kent.homer.realestate@gmail.com

        Make your next Real Estate Deal a Smooth and Stress-Free one.

        When you hire me you will have a team of attorneys, mortgage officers and title personnel working on your behalf to take away all the stress.

        I provide my clients a Real Smooth Real Estate experience with Up-To-Date Education on Market Conditions, Government Regulations and Up-Coming Developments.

        I will save you Time and Money by knowing your Needs and Wants and showing you only Properties that Best Suit your Requirements.

        Don’t worry about the Contingencies and Complicated Paperwork. My capable team of experts will go right to work for you. You will have their phone numbers and my phone number right at your fingertips to Answer any Question/s you may have.

        Last but not least I will provide you expert advice on the Pricing & Staging of your home that will set you apart from ANY competition without you having to lift a finger.

        If you want your Next Deal to be Stress-Free, just give me a call today to discuss working together. 801-501-(SOLD) 7653

        Best Regards, Kent

        The text above is my 30 second infomercial. I would appreciate any feedback that you may have.

         

      • #24473

        Anonymous
          @

          @kent-homer This is a really GREAT first draft!

          The only thing I want you to add is 3 pain point questions in the beginning followed by a brief introduction. You can use this template:

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients _________.

          Then take out this line “Make your next Real Estate Deal a Smooth and Stress-Free one.” and start with “When you hire me…” Also, you can leave out “Best Regards, Kent” it looks better in writing than it does saying it on camera.

          Everything else is GOLDEN!

      Viewing 1 reply thread

      Support Forums are being phased out. You can still view the existing Forum posts but can no longer post in them. For all Support needs, please email help@coredm.com or click the blue Question Mark icon in the lower right hand corner of your screen.