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      Bruce Graham
      Participant
        @bgraham1121@gmail.com

        Hello, I am Bruce Graham, and I am a proud member of a real estate investing community committed to educating millions of people to create wealth through business ownership and real estate. You’ve heard, “It takes a village to raise a child”? Well, we are here to be your village and walk with you every step of the way to Your Own Future of Financial Abundance.

        Do you know anyone who lost a job through no fault of their own?

        Quick story – A 55 year old computer programmer came to us after his boss suddenly let him go to cut costs.

        Picture it – 55, jobless, and with 2 kids in college.

        We taught him how to Find, Fund, and Fix and Flip properties.
        And in 3 years, he’s brought into his OWN COMPANY $750,000 in profits!
        Now he’s the only person who can fire himself.

        Up for another SUCCESS STORY?

        We also taught a BROKE COLLEGE STUDENT to apply the Buy and Hold strategy and in 3 years he has amassed 75 rental units that are now PAYING HIM MONTHLY INCOME.

        And he did all that using NONE OF HIS OWN MONEY!!!

        What are your financial challenges?

        Message me here on LinkedIn to see if we can work together. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your message.”

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        n d
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          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @bruce-graham!

          A really nice job on your infomercial! You provided some good information. Few things:

          I’d like this to be a bit more organized, which will go a long way.

          Please fill out this template in order for your message to be even more powerful. 

          How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

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