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Hi @dean-gary, absolutely. I just need you to provide your LinkedIn URL.
Don’t know how to find that?
- click on ‘tutorials’ on the left side of this program site
- watch the first video on how to get your LinkedIn URL
Please let me know if you have difficulty with this.
I look forward to providing your feedback!
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Hi @dean-gary! A really nice job on your LinkedIn profile! Below is my feedback:
SUPER background photo!
Profile Photo:
I’d like you to get a better quality photo and one that is in color rather than black and white. This will help it look more inviting.
Headline:
I need you to focus on either BUYERS or SELLERS. Not BOTH. This will help with your targeting, so choose the one you’re most excited about.
With that being said:
This is the best piece of ‘real estate’ on your LinkedIn profile. Let’s really make it POP. How about something like this…
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
Summary:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important.
How about you ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your clients struggle with.
What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?” THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
Also, your paragraphs are a bit chunky and need better organization. (check out the examples I provided and look at the format which you can copy)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You want to provide information that is:
Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you. It’s nice to educate them but not throughout the entire profile.
Testimonials:
This should not be taking up the majority of your summary. Have up to three, 1 sentence testimonials.
Call To Action:
You need one!
“If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision! 🙂
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Hi @dean-gary, nice job revising but I’d like you to look back over my feedback. There are some changes that still need to be made.
Have you looked into adding a new profile photo in color??
Your headline (words under name) still needs work.
Consider this one:
Want To Find Your Dream Home WITHOUT Added Stress? ☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Or
Want To Find The PERFECT Home While Saving MONEY?☆EXPERT Realtor ☆ Love Your Home Or I’ll Buy It Back ☆☞ MSG Me!
Summary:
I want you to look back at the examples I sent in my previous post. Feel free to copy and paste their outline and add your own information to it. Right now, your paragraphs are really chunky and hard to read.
Also, your testimonials are way way too long. I want more information on HOW you help your clients, WHAT you do for them and WHY they should work with you.
Please revise and tag me in your revision. You are so close 🙂
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try now. shortened testimonilas, added what you suggested. made it clearer in body.
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Hi @dean-gary!!
GREAT headline – glad you changed it. This looks so much more inviting!
I’m also glad to hear you’ll be getting a new profile photo! Fun fact: if you email your new photo to our graphic designer, she can add a white background to make it more professional.
Summary:
MUCH better, Dean. Below I’m going to re-FORMAT your profile summary (I really want it to look perfect). All you have to do is copy and paste what I’ve restructured, into your summary. I think this will help immensely 🙂
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Want an agent who is CONFIDENT in their negotiation skills?
Do you want your first month’s PAYMENT covered 100%??
Are you wanting a ZERO hassle and stressful experience?
If you answered YES to those questions, you came to the right place.
My team and I are EXPERTS at finding the right home for you in your price range!
We take your EXACT criteria and ONLY show you homes that meet your needs PLUS you will receive a FULL list of beautiful homes before they hit the market!
In addition…
If I don’t get at least $5,000 off your next home, I will PAY you.
Yep. You hear that right!
What’s EVEN better?
If you do not like your home in the first 12 months, I will BUY it back or sell it for FREE.
Why?? Because I’m confident that you will find the right home at the right time. I love to take care of my clients with a high-quality experience.
WHAT OTHERS HAVE SAID:
“The Dean Gary bunch are such ROCKSTARS! The whole team was on TOP of their game! Anywhere/anytime we needed them, they were there!”
“My wife & I have the great privilege of having toured homes with the Dean Gary Team. He was a trusted ally in our home search & we would highly recommend him!”
“This by far was the best experience in buying a home. The Dean Gary team were on it! He found me a home for the price we wanted in a tough buying market!”
Like music to my ears!
If you want the best price and guarantees in the business then MESSAGE me here on Linkedin TODAY to see if we are a good fit!
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sorry for delay went surfing for a couple weeks. Back in action. here is this link and my infomercial will be up shortly
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