30 Second Infomercial

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- September 10, 2018 at 12:14 am #22222
  Peter Neufeldt
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  @peter@peakperformanceconsulting.ca
  Negeen, Thank you for your review of my draft infomercial.
  
  Here is the second draft!
  
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- September 10, 2018 at 9:20 pm #22281
  n d
  Keymaster
  @negeen@coredm.com
  Hi @peter-neufeldt, you’re a fast learner! SUPER job! Few tiny little tweaks to really make your message powerful:
  
  Good pain point questions!
  
  After you say they came to the right place, introduce yourself and then say what you do.
  
  “Hi, I’m @peter-neufeldt”
  
  Instead of saying “my clients”
  
  You should speak to THEM and say:
  
  “What’s better? With the SUPPORT and GUIDANCE of strategic coaching… YOU get _____.”
  
  GREAT call to action!!
- September 10, 2018 at 11:10 pm #22292
  Peter Neufeldt
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  @peter@peakperformanceconsulting.ca
  Hi Negeen,
  
  I just sent you an updated version of my 30 second infomercial, bu then I realized just a shift of one of the introductory paragraphs was needed. So here is the most recent version. Thanks for your help!
  
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- September 11, 2018 at 10:47 am #22334
  n d
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  @negeen@coredm.com
  Hi @peter-neufeldt! Okay perfect!! Yes, this looks great!!
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