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Are you wanting higher margins?
Do you need more operational controls?
Want to operate within the top 10% of the industryIf you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
We have worked to improve some of the top restaurants in the world…..become the next one to improve.
Let Kaizen Management assist you in getting your team to perform to the next level…give us a call @ 201.436.8369/917.282.0124 for a free consultation.
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Hi @robert-sloop, PLEASE COMMENT on YOUR post, this is to avoid confusion. I had to make a NEW post for you.
Awesome job revising!
GREAT pain point questions! Right to the point.
After you say “you came to the right place,” don’t forget to introduce yourself. This is important so people know who they are listening to.
“Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.”
So, I had no idea you helped restaurants until you just now mentioned it briefly. DIVE DEEPER.
Write 2-5 sentences on HOW you help people in the restaurant business. HOW do you help them? WHY should they work with you? WHO exactly do you work with? Write this as complete sentences.
Instead of having them call you, just say “message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit for a free consultation” – this is so you’re not reading both of those numbers in the video.
Hope this helps!
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Are you looking for better margins?
Do you need more key operational controls?
Want to operate within the top 10% of the restaurant industryIf you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m Bob Sloop and I am CEO of Kaizen Management, a premier full-service restaurant consulting firm that can elevate your performance to the next level.
We have worked to improve some of the top restaurants in the world.
With over 35 years of experience within the food service industry, and internationally recognized as one of the industry’s leading financial consultants in the sector, Kaizen has worked with some of the industry’s leading multi-concept restaurant groups, which include, Jean-Georges Management, Gotham City Restaurant Group, Toscorp Inc, Pushkin USA, Smith & Wollensky, Michel Richard, Richard Sandoval, Blue Shore Grill, Barilla Restaurant Group, and White Star Holdings.
If knowledge is power, buying more of it is far smarter than not. If your company is looking to leapfrog the competition, we can help you ask better questions and get better answers.
Let Kaizen Management assist you in getting your team to perform to the next level…give us a Linked In message for a <u>free consultation</u>.
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Hi @robert-sloop! This looks so much better! Few things:
Great pain point questions + introduction to what you do and who you are.
When you start with this sentence:
“With over 35 years…”
The rest of your infomercial is very “this is why we are legit” and less of “When you work with us, you get high quality _______”
You included almost 11 industries!! That’s a LOT to list out in a video.
I want you to talk about WHO you help, HOW you help your clients and why your work stands out.
Call to action is OK.
I do recommend using something powerful like:
If you’re READY to catapult your restaurant to the next level, message me here on LI TODAY to see if we’re a good fit!
(you can switch that up)
Tag me in your revision 🙂
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