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    • #21434

      filippa reading
      Participant
        @filippa321@gmail.com

        Infomercial                                                                                                     8/30/18

         

        It’s all about You!

        When selecting a Real estate agent, you need someone who sees you as a person, NOT a profit!

        • Who listens and understands your particular needs
        • Who knows the local market
        • Communicates with YOU on a regular basis
        • Handles all the details for You
        • Gets You the best value – whether you are buying or selling.

        From charming cottages, to luxurious condos, to waterfront estates, I can find the perfect home to fit every budget and life-style

         

        CALL ME: 954.478.1877

         

         

      • #21452

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @filippa-reading! Nice job making a new post AND beginning your infomercial! Few things:

          Because you’ll be reading this out loud while you’re being filmed, you want to avoid bullet points. You want to really engage with your viewer. Follow this template below:

          How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

        • #21527

          filippa reading
          Participant
            @filippa321@gmail.com

            @negeen-dargahi  @halle-eavelyn

            2nd revision ;o)

             

            Are you WANTING a real estate transaction without all the stress?

            Do you NEED someone that you can trust?

            WANT someone who LISTENS and understands YOUR particular need?

            If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right person!

            Hi, I’m Filippa Reading and I am a Real Estate Professional helping home-owners get top dollar for their property with no stress involved.

            Yes, you heard that right! I don’t just list houses, I get them SOLD. When you work with me you gain a trusted advocate who has perfected the art of negotiating and marketing residential properties. I’m a professional who can speak the language.

            I look at every angle from your perspective. I keep you informed at every step of the way and I Pre-Qualify every potential buyer before they enter your home.

            If you’re ready to see a SOLD sign in your yard and a bunch of extra money in your bank account then call me TODAY at 954.478.1877 or message me here on LI to see if we’re a good fit!

            Seriously – This is all about You!

             

             

          • #21542

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Wow! GREAT work, @filippa-reading! You nailed it!!

              Take out “Seriously – This is all about You!” at the end and this is perfect. So proud of you 🙂

               

            • #21670

              filippa reading
              Participant
                @filippa321@gmail.com

                @negeen-dargahi

                THANK YOU!

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