Hi @verna-bacon!

Nice job taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:

Don’t forget to add your new photo and zoom in.

You also need a background photo, which you can email Lindsey about. Just share with her your field of business and she will create a background image for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

This needs some work. How about filling out this template and then copy and paste it in the headline spot:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

You need a lot more information in your summary to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.

Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.

They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!

when you’re writing your testimonials, keep it SHORT. 1 sentence per testimonial.
You also need a better call to action. How about this:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision 🙂