Hi @robin-fuller! Nice job taking action on your profile! Few things:

Great profile photo! Zoom in more so we can see your face a bit better!

I like your background photo but it can be better customized for you. Our graphic designer can actually create a background photo for you or edit the image that you currently have. Just email her, tell her about your field of business (add the photo in the attachment if you’d like) and she will customize it.

Lindsey@coredm.com

The headline looks GREAT!

Summary:

There needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.

Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.

They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

There’s far too much emphasis in here on YOU and not enough on THEM – these videos will help you see why it’s important to make it so much more about them!

You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!

when you’re writing your testimonials, keep it SHORT. 1 sentence per testimonial.

You also need a better call to action. How about this:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision 🙂

Hi @robin-fuller!! You seriously nailed it! SO proud of you hard work 🙂