Alan – Please review revised profile

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    • July 26, 2018 at 4:28 pm #17815

      Alan Morris
      Participant
        @themorristeam@cox.net

        Please review my revised profile based upon suggestions.

        linkedin.com/in/alan-morris-59397428

        @negeen-dargahi

        @kent-littlejohn

        Thanks,

         

         

      • July 26, 2018 at 10:50 pm #17890

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @alan-morris! Great job taking action on your profile!

          Love the background photo!

          Love your profile photo!

          And yes, love your headline!

          Summary:

          I challenge you to replace “i” with “you” because there are loads of them!

          Lastly, the part where you add info about yourself “My passions in life are God, family, and Country.” consider shortening it a little bit, okay?

          Everything else looks fantastic! Great great work!!

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