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      Michele Mittemiller
      Participant
        @refer.michele@gmail.com

        Here is my rough draft.

        Do you want your next Real Estate deal to be stress-free?  Do you want to dominate the negotiations? With strategic planning, this will be possible. I equip my clients with the most up to date market conditions and education, so stop worrying about the contingency or paperwork.  Let me should you how I will save you valuable time and maximize your profit. My expert advice on pricing and staging will set you apart from the competition without you having to lift a finger.  If you want your next deal to be stress-free, please call me today to discuss working together. 702-510-0279 Thank you, Michele

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        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @michele-mittemiller! Nice job taking action on your infomercial! Few things:

          I like that you started off with pain point questions! Yes, so have 3 POWERFUL and specific questions that your customer avatar will relate to.

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (add in your 2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help — which you have great sentences above that can go right here)

          (your motivating 1 liner)

          If you’re wanting _______________ then message or call me TODAY at _________ to see if we’re a good fit.

           

          ** you have great content, just fill it in the blanks above and add what needs to be added. Great work!

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