Hi Christina!

Cute – in my family, we used to say “pretty please with sugar and cinnamon on top” LOL

When you post, you’ll get a quicker response if you tag the CoreDM/HECP member who can help  you like @negeen-dargahi

My thoughts, as a fellow HECP-er (who’s had the benefit of help from many others):

Your professional photo is great – you can make it “pop” with a solid white background which HECP can help with.  The layout of your pic in your banner right on top of your professional photo could distract –  you might want to crop yourself out of your banner.

Don’t forget to search the forums for ideas from what other realtors have done, and consider how this revised header reads:

Want a firm who will PERFORM to help you buy/sell your home ? We hold ourselves ACCOUNTABLE with our guarantee!

You’re on the right track – keep that MIA (massive imperfect action) going!

teresa

Hi @christina-hansen, I responded days ago but for some reason my comment never posted!! Thank you for the reminder @teresa-davila! Great feedback. Below is mine:

Great profile photo! Can you send it to our graphic designer and have her add a white background for you?? Once she sends the photo back, please zoom in more so we can see your face clearly.

I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s VERY loud and hard to read with all the text. I’d also like you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

This needs some work. How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Please ONLY focus on talking to either buyers OR sellers. Never both.**

Summary:

There needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter. Right now, I just see a lot of info and not “here’s how I can help you”.

Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.

They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bulls eye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

There’s far too much emphasis in here on YOU and not enough on THEM – these videos will help you see why it’s important to make it so much more about them!

You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!

when you’re writing your testimonials, keep it SHORT. 1 sentence per testimonial.
You also need a better call to action. How about this:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision 🙂