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      Kimberly Hubenette
      Participant
        @drhubenette@synergydentalgroup.net

        <u>Anti-Aging Benefits for life In Health and Wealth 30 second commercial.</u>

         

        Are you living paycheck to paycheck? What if you lost 50% of your retirement, could you and your spouse survive?
        How would you like to eliminate the risk of losing retirement money, earn residual royalty money that goes directly to your heirs?

         

        Is Balancing Time, Healthy living, and Work a Myth right now?? Have you always dreamed of having a Hobby as your main Job? One that allows you create your own hours? Be healthy first, have time to spend with your family, and make enough money to live on a Part time Career?

         

        My name is Dr. Kimberly Hubenette, and I am an Anti-Aging Whole Body Health Dentist & Mentor for those that Seek to live an Extraordinary Lifestyle. Through Education, Analysis, and Strategic Planning, I guide you to learn about optimum balance in health and wealth. For those that have an entrepreneurial spirit, opportunity awaits you to become partners in an ethical type of residual income, a plan “B” associated with my field of expertise.

         

        I am in search for High Action Business Leaders Hungry to build Long term Relationships with their clients and business partners. You must be ethical as well as a servant leader. WE are in momentum stage and need to spread the word to the entire world . The unique statistics on our company and the TIMING of joining our company is one of those type of opportunities that only comes along once in a life time.

         

        You will gain sound educational value and the ability to decide your fate when it comes to health, being a customer, jumping into a partnership in business, or nothing at all.

        If this intrigues you to learn more, please visit my link for more information and email me to see if we are a good fit to work together.

        Thank you for your time and I look forward to reading your message.

         

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        Kimberly Hubenette
        Participant
          @drhubenette@synergydentalgroup.net

          What do you think of this???? I am not sure how to edit my post, I hit the button before I could ask for help about this???

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          n d
          Keymaster
            @negeen@coredm.com

            Hi @kimberly-hubenette! Nice work taking action on your infomercial! Below is my feedback:

            You’ve got some great content in there but I can already tell its long.

            I want you to fill out this template to better organize your thoughts, okay?? TAG me in your revision!

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            How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions… (short and sweet)

            (after you ask 3 questions)

            If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.

            Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

            (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help — which you have great sentences above that can go right here)

            (motivating 1 liner)

            If you’re wanting _______________ then message or call me TODAY at _________ to see if we’re a good fit.

             

             

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