2 replies, 3 voices Last updated by n d 6 years, 2 months ago
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    • #15983

      Donna Bistrican
      Participant
        @donnabis@kw.com

        30 SECOND VALUE PROPOSITION

        Want to SELL your home for TOP DOLLAR within your time-frame?
        Want your Next Real Estate transaction to be STRESS-FREE?
        Would you find it refreshing to actually receive great SERVICE combined with STRONG RESULTS?
        If you answered YES to all of those questions, I know EXACTLY how to help YOU!
        Hi, I’m Donna Bistrican, a licensed REALTOR® helping clients in the GREATER DES MOINES area!
        Selling your home today requires much more than simply putting a sign in your yard and your Listing on the MLS.
        When YOU work with me, not only will I put your needs first, you will also get top-notch service from my entire team!
        We actively monitor the local Real Estate Market to be sure I have your home priced right, so it will SELL for the most money the market will allow in your time-frame!
        We will PROSPECT, including using SOCIAL MEDIA and other Technology, to find a Buyer!
        If you want your next Real Estate Deal to be Stress-Free and RESULTS DRIVEN, please call me today to discuss working together:
        515-954-5928
        THANKS!

      • #16034

        Halle Eavelyn
        Moderator
          @halle@coredm.com

          NICE!!  This is really good and I think will serve you well –

          I would change this to: We will PROSPECT, including using SOCIAL MEDIA and other Technology, to find you a qualified Buyer!

          Otherwise, great work! @negeen-dargahi??

        • #16061

          n d
          Keymaster
            @negeen@coredm.com

            SO much better @donna-bistrican!! Really nice work, I also agree with @halle-eavelyn!

            Lastly, when you say “and your Listing on the MLS.”

            Change to:

            “than simply putting a sign in your yard and PLACING your listing on MLS.”

            Having something in front of “your listing” in my opinion really conveys your point.

            Looking forward to seeing this filmed!

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