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Would you find it refreshing to receive some great old-fashioned SERVICE the next time you work with a Realtor? Do you want your Next Real Estate Deal to be Stress-Free!? No silly games, wasting valuable time or OVER PROMISING here; simply honest-smart hard work!
Keeping in contact with YOU at agreed upon times, returning all calls, texts, and emails as soon as possible- is my promise to you!
I am a full-time, successful, experienced, professional REALTOR who will put your needs first- in order to Sell your Home or to Find your next dream home!
Selling your home requires much more than simply putting a Sign in the yard and the Listing in the local MLS.
I PROACTIVELY watch the Real Estate Market to be sure I have priced your Home or Property where it will SELL in the time-frame we have previously agreed upon- for the most money the market will allow!
I PROSPECT to find a qualified BUYER for your home or property- MYSELF!
If you want your Next Real Estate Deal to be Stress-Free please call me today to discuss working togetherā¦
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Hi @donna-bistrican, nice job taking action on your infomercial! You provided loads of good info!
Few things:
Are you helping clients SELL or BUY? Please specify in your infomercial. Only pick 1 to target:
I am not a fan of your 3 pain point questions, I feel that saying “old fashioned” may work against you. How about something like:
“Has your home been sitting on the market for longer than it NEEDS to be?”
“Are you wanting a HARD WORKING and full service realtor by your side?”
“Do you want QUALIFIED buyers looking at your property?”
If you answered YES to all of those questions, I know EXACTLY how to help you!
Hi, I’m __________ and I am a ________helping clients in [LOCATION].
When YOU work with me, not only will you get ____________ , you will also be getting top notch ___________.
Yes, you heard that right!
(2-3 more sentences of what you’ve provided above)
Good call to action!
^^ see how what I wrote really helped it flow and get to the point? Hope this helps! Please TAG me in your revision š
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30 SECOND VALUE PROPOSITION
Want to SELL your home for TOP DOLLAR within your time-frame?
Want your Next Real Estate transaction to be STRESS-FREE?
Would you find it refreshing to actually receive great SERVICE combined with STRONG RESULTS?
If you answered YES to all of those questions, I know EXACTLY how to help YOU!
Hi, Iām Donna Bistrican, a licensed REALTORĀ® helping clients in the GREATER DES MOINES area!
Selling your home today requires much more than simply putting a sign in your yard and your Listing on the MLS.
When YOU work with me, not only will I put your needs first, you will also get top-notch service from my entire team!
We actively monitor the local Real Estate Market to be sure I have your home priced right, so it will SELL for the most money the market will allow in your time-frame!
We will PROSPECT, including using SOCIAL MEDIA and other Technology, to find a Buyer!
If you want your next Real Estate Deal to be Stress-Free and RESULTS DRIVEN, please call me today to discuss working together:
515-954-5928
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@donna-bistricanĀ please watch my Customer Avatar videoĀ in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bulls eye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.Ā
It will explain to you why you ALWAYS want to be talking only to EITHER buyers or sellers and not both at once!
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Absolutely, @donna-bistrican
It was this line that made us comment:Ā Sell your Home or to Find your next dream home
Of course it’s true that you can ALSO help your seller buy his next place, but we want to focus on JUST your sellers for now.Ā This:Ā I PROSPECT to find a qualified BUYER for your home or property- MYSELF!
is still fine.
Make sense?
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Want to SELL your home for TOP DOLLAR within your time-frame?
Want your Next Real Estate transaction to be STRESS-FREE?
Would you find it refreshing to actually receive great SERVICE combined with STRONG RESULTS?
If you answered YES to all of those questions, I know EXACTLY how to help YOU!
Hi, Iām Donna Bistrican, a licensed REALTORĀ® helping clients in the GREATER DES MOINES area!
Selling your home today requires much more than simply putting a sign in your yard and your Listing on the MLS.
When YOU work with me, not only will I put your needs first, you will also get top notch service from my entire team!
We actively monitor the local Real Estate Market to be sure I have your home priced right, so it will SELL for the most money the market will allow in your time-frame!
We will PROSPECT, including using SOCIAL MEDIA and other Technology, to find a Buyer!
If you want your next Real Estate Deal to be Stress-Free and RESULTS DRIVEN, please call me today to discuss working together:
515-954-5928
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I know you’re already working on the filming, @donna-bistrican, and I LOVE this version!Ā YAY!!
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Are you Worried your home maybe sitting on the market longer than you like?
Are you looking for a hard working and FULL service Realtor at your side?
Do you want QUALIFIED buyers looking at your home?
If your answer is YES to all of those questions, I know EXACTLY how to help you!
Hi, I’m Kurt Axt and I am a Real Estate Broker helping clients in the Raleigh area.
When you work with me, not only will you get a fully licensed Broker, you will be getting TOP notch service.
Yes, you herd that right!
We proactively navigate your real estate market to be sure your home and property are priced right to get you the most MONEY!
I will help you review ALL offers so the best qualified buyers are chosen. With little stress and worry.
You will understand the process so that you have a smooth and pleasant transaction.
I return ALL calls, emails and text ASAP!
Call me now at, 919-307-5698
Kurt Axt
Raleigh Market Realty
@negeen-dargahiĀ @halle-eavelyn
I’m always open for any revision you have.
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Hi @kurt-axt, for future reference, please make a new post to avoid confusion! Below is my feedback:
A really nice job on your infomercial!!
Only revision is with your call to action – let’s really leave them with a BANG!
Fill this out:
If you’re ready for _________ then call me TODAY at ____________ or message me here on LI to see if we’re a good fit!
Once you do that, your infomercial is ready to be recorded! Woohoo!!
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I’m going to challenge you, @kurt-axt.Ā Look at the words in bold below, and strengthen themĀ – make them more meaningful and more specific – tell your clients what’s in it for THEM!!
Example: helping clients – HOW? What will you do for them? Why you? Why should they care? Keep answering the question HOW and/or WHY and you will get to the bottom thing where you tell them the RESULTS.Ā THAT’s what you want to put in your profile (and ALL the marketing materials you create for this program!)
Hi, Iām Kurt Axt and I am a Real Estate Broker helping clients in the Raleigh area.
When you work with me, not only will you get a fully licensed Broker, you will be getting TOP notch service.
Yes, you heard that right!
We proactively navigate your real estate market to be sure your home and property are priced right to get you the most MONEY!
I will help you review ALL offers so the best qualified buyers are chosen. With little stress and worry.
You will understand the process so that you have a smooth and pleasant transaction.
I return ALL calls, emails and text ASAP!
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