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Is your income what you want it to be? Could you use an extra $2K, $5K or even $10K per month? If I could show you a product that everyone 30 years old and older needs would you be interested?
Hi, Remy Boots here and I’m a Distributor for NewULife and we have the only Homeopathic Transdermal FDA approved product called Somaderm HGH Gel. I will help you, help others experience a proven product that may help in; Anti-Aging, Fat Loss, Enhanced Lean Muscle, Improved Sleep, and Heighten Libido. And you will be very satisfied with the income you will generate with this product.
I will connect you to this UP and COMING health supplement company called NewULife. You will have access to proven marketing materials. And we have a generous compensation plan!
This is THE premium supplement that is FDA approved and it is totally homeopathic.
I’ve been in the healthcare industry for over 30 years this is a WIN. WIN. WIN. Outcome. Individuals Win. Health related Businesses Win. And YOU Win!!!
If you want to work with me and my TERRIFIC up line support team, SHOOT ME A MESSAGE or call/text me at 541-499-4603
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Hey @remy-boots! A really nice job taking @halle-eavelyn and revising! So much better. Here’s what I personally saw that could be revised:
After you ask your two pain point questions:
“Is your income what you want it to be? Could you use an extra $2K, $5K or even $10K per month?
I want you to not say the “would you be interested” and perhaps instead say:
If so, and you’re ready to start generating an income, I know EXACTLY how to help!
@remy-boots here, ETC ETC.
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@halle-eavelyn, what are your thoughts on this? Remy, you’ve mentioned the FDA approved twice so take it out of the end.
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@remy-boots, you may want to watch my Positioning video as well. I suggest revising your CTA:
Now:
If you want to work with me and my TERRIFIC up line support team, SHOOT ME A MESSAGE or call/text me at 541-499-4603
Suggested:
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Great job!!!
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Is your income what you want it to be? Could you use an extra $2K, $5K or even $10K per month? If I could show you a product that everyone 30 years old and older needs would you be interested?
Hi, Remy Boots here and I’m a Distributor for NewULife and we have the only Homeopathic Transdermal FDA approved product called Somaderm HGH Gel. I will help you, help others experience a proven product that may help in; Anti-Aging, Fat Loss, Enhanced Lean Muscle, Improved Sleep, and Heighten Libido. And you will be very satisfied with the income you will generate with this product.
I will connect you to this UP and COMING health supplement company called NewULife. You will have access to proven marketing materials. And we have a generous compensation plan!
This is THE premium supplement that is FDA approved and it is totally homeopathic.
I’ve been in the healthcare industry for over 30 years this is a WIN. WIN. WIN. Outcome. Individuals Win. Health related Businesses Win. And YOU Win!!!
If you want to see if you qualify to work with me and my TERRIFIC up line support team, message me here or call/text me at 541-499-4603
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Haven’t hear back from you Halle on my revised infomercial. Once approved then I make the infomercial? Cell phone video ok or do I need something better?
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@halle-eavelyn, thoughts on this? ^
“This is THE premium supplement that is FDA approved and it is totally homeopathic.”
is mentioned twice, once in the beginning with “FDA” and “homeopathic” but I prefer it worded like he has above.
I’m also concerned about the recording time, as this may run over.
cc: @remy-boots, muchhhhhh better, by the way! Let’s see what Halle says!
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Ok ladies I pulled the repeat statement, so how’s this??
Is your income what you want it to be? Could you use an extra $2K, $5K or even $10K per month? If I could show you a product that everyone 30 years old and older needs would you be interested? If so, and you’re ready to start generating an income, I know EXACTLY how to help!
Hi, Remy Boots here and I’m a Distributor for NewULife and we have the only Homeopathic Transdermal FDA approved product called Somaderm HGH Gel. I will help you, help others experience a proven product that may help in; Anti-Aging, Fat Loss, Enhanced Lean Muscle, Improved Sleep, and Heighten Libido. And you will be very satisfied with the income you will generate with this product.
I will connect you to this UP and COMING health supplement company called NewULife. You will have access to proven marketing materials. And we have a generous compensation plan!
I’ve been in the healthcare industry for over 30 years this is a WIN. WIN. WIN. Outcome. Individuals Win. Health related Businesses Win. And YOU Win!!!
If you want to work with me and my TERRIFIC up line support team, SHOOT ME A MESSAGE or call/text me at 541-499-4603
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Great, AND… I think it still needs some cleanup, @remy-boots.
Try this:
Could you use an extra $2K, $5K or even $10K per month? Would you like to sell something you can really believe in? If I could show you a product that everyone 30 and above needs would you be interested? If you’re ready to start generating an income, I know EXACTLY how to help!
Hi, Remy Boots here and I’m a Distributor for NewULife! We have the only Homeopathic Transdermal FDA approved product – it’s called Somaderm HGH Gel and you’re going to be really proud of being able to help lots of folks. Experience a proven product that may help in; Anti-Aging, Fat Loss, Enhanced Lean Muscle, Improved Sleep, and Heighten Libido. See for yourself and help your clients – And… you will be very satisfied with the income you will generate with Somaderm, too.
I will connect you to NewULife, an UP and COMING health supplement company. You will have access to our proven marketing materials. And we have a generous compensation plan!
I’ve been in the healthcare industry for over 30 years this is a WIN. WIN. WIN Outcome! Individuals Win. Health related Businesses Win. And YOU Win!!!
If you want to work with me and my TERRIFIC upline support team, SHOOT ME A MESSAGE or call/text me at 541-499-4603
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