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Hi @filippa-reading! Thank you for submitting your profile for review and taking action! Below is my feedback:
Beautiful profile photo! You need a better background photo, and our graphic designer can actually create one for you!
All you have to do is:
Email her at Lindsey@coredm.com and tell her a little about your field of business and what you would like and she will help create that for you!
Also, if you can attach a copy of your LI profile photo in the email as well, Lindsey can add in a white background for your profile photo so it really pops! Just ask her to do this as well as the background.
Let me know if you need further assistance!The headline could be better, you DON’T want to add your phone number in your headline. That is for the end of your summary in the call to action. Instead… fill this out:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
Great start and I love that you are empathizing with you audience.
I want you to BEGIN your summary asking 3 powerful pain point questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitorsWho you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/ -
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Hi @filippa-reading!
Did you email your profile photo and request for a new background to our graphic designer, Lindsey??
Much better headline!
Summary still needs work:
Please look at the feedback I provided above. Your first 2 sentences are VERY important because if it doesn’t immediately grab someone’s attention, they’re not going to click ‘view more’.
Look how this profile immediately grabs your attention! Copy that! https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
You can start your summary off asking 3 pain point questions:
“Tired of _____”
“Want _______ but CANT?”
“Are you ______?”
If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help!
When you work with me, you will get ____________.
Essentially…
_________________.
^ you have a lot of “i” in your profile. Replace it with “you” so its about THEM.
Only put your phone number in ONCE, and only at the end.
Put only a few sentences about yourself and get back to HOW you can help.
You need a better call to action, which I provided an example above in my previous feedback:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
Please look at the feedback I provided and implement the changes.
Tag me in your revision!
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@negeen-dargahi, @halle-eavelyn,
Can you please take a look at my revised LinkedIn profile.
Thank you!
https://www.linkedin.com/in/filippa-leijonhufvud-reading-a759a055/
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@filippa-reading YES YES YES! I’m so so proud of you. Great work, you did a really nice job with your profile!!
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@negeen-dargahi (SMILING! Thank you ;o)
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Hi, @filippa-reading –
Your profile is beautiful! Yet I’m a little confused… your headline is for buyers AND sellers?
Find Your BEACH HOME, with OCEAN ACCESS! MESSAGE ME now for an EXPERT plan to get your home SOLD for Top Dollar!
FIND (for Buyers)
Get your home SOLD (for sellers?)
I *think* your Avatar is a SELLER, so in that case… You can keep the headline, but let’s REVERSE the sentences. And maybe add THEN. So it would read:
MESSAGE ME now for an EXPERT plan to get your home SOLD for Top Dollar! Then get your NEW BEACH HOME, with OCEAN ACCESS!
Does this work?
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@halle-eavelyn – Yes, make sense! I will change that! Thanks!
One more question…and I have been trying to find an answer in Q&A…
On LinkedIn; Do I first connect with people like “Hi, thanks for connecting with me” or “Hi, want to connect?” and then ask the “What’s your core business?”
Filippa
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Hi @filippa-reading, just connect with them and THEN once connected, go through your Q1 as normal.
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