GREAT JOB!!!  Take out My Hero Story – the headline is JUST your headline, ok?

You might search the Google to see if there is a way to recrop the photo you used – in the thumbnail it’s the bottom half of everyone’s bodies.  Otherwise, you might want to recrop this pic yourself so that it’s the aspect ratio of the photo window (ie. if it were half as tall, it would force LinkedIn to show the heads and not the bodies).

WOOHOO!!!!

Under Mark R’s Articles.  And I’m seeing ALMOST everyone’s heads now, LOL!  I’d resize it again – crop it in from the bottom to the shoulder of the little kid.  That way your head should finally show!

Also!!!  Change the title “30-second infomercial” to “What Mark can do for you in 30 seconds” (or 1.07 min, or however long it is!)

Halle,

The HERO STORY is finally published! Wow – A long arduous process ending with a tremendously rewarding and satisfying experience however not before a lot of frustration. This was truly a love-hate exercise. I look forward to your feedback.

The link:

https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/buyers-you-too-can-easily-have-your-peice-paradise-south-loffredo/?published=t

Please note:  I have not added photos yet as I was having trouble with sizing, etc. and did not want to hold up moving forward. I will be doing photo editing soon.

@halle-eavelyn, tagging you in this  – thank you @v-anthony-loffredo!!